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FMDF - Chapter 28

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    1. qaqmyheart

      are you just gonna gloss over the fact that kael said i love you to hestia?? ik it could be a heat of moment thing but kael doesn’t seem like that sorta guy

    2. Saltymcnuggies

      Oh my fucking God I came here from reading the manhwa and completely missed the R-19 tag yooo 😭😭

      Dem smegs scenes hit me like a wrecking ball

      1. Athanasia

        Haha it hit everyone like a wrecking ball. When I first translated I didn’t realize it was R19 so it didn’t have the tag until after this scene was already posted

  1. Guinnie

    Wow! I was not expecting that, but I am so excited that they are a “real” couple now! Go, Kael!

    Thank you for the chapter!

  2. Aqua

    Wow! I was not expecting that, I thought they would skip over it if anything. I guess this means the Smut tag needs to be added on novelupdates, though.👍

  3. Coco

    Thank you for translating and sharing it with us!

    I did NOT expect Kaelus to be that bold. Tekima should paint the blue flame all over this guy instead as a warning to everyone lmao.

    I feel so bad for the crown prince. He did the worst thing that he could do to his best friend, drove him to attempted ‘that’ and selfishly think Kael will be happy if he sees Helios happy. But he did admit his mistake and apologize sincerely. He also needs to suffer because Diana refuse to acknowledge her own limitation. I really hope Diana will apologize soon. There is no going back if Kaelus attack her with the temple’s wrongdoing.

    Anyway, I love Hestia with all her limitation and wicked plan. I do understand anyone would fall for her. Except Diana because she choose to be blind and deaf at the moment. Just hope she could cut Helios some slack. Poor guy.

    That was long, but looking forward to see how this ends

  4. Meira

    Well…. I definitely did not expect that….
    I’ve seen the r19 tag but i didn’t thought it would be at that exact moment… 😂

  5. Wolfgirl12

    I expected they wud eventually make love.. BUT NOT THIS HARDCOREEEE.. OMG I LOVE IT.. 🤣🤣 With Kael like this, who needs porn?! 🤣🤣🤣 It’s like, he is like a starving vampire. Once he tasted it, he wants more n more.. I ain’t complaint tho..

  6. Damn kael I didnt expect that shi I thought we was gonna go straight to morning nah bro kaelus said “time for that first night” 😍 he had been waiting for a while for Hess tho ig when his feelings were finally accepted bro couldn’t contain himself gad damn

    1. Loulou

      Loll. He ate fr all the time he wasn’t able to. And he said, I’m not letting Helios freaking win again, so wait in the house I’ll be back🤣

  7. L

    Wohooo Kael is done backing and is here to take. He is literally not taking chanses and imprinting his woman 😃🤘🤘🤘 This chapter was like from 0 to 100000 🥇
    I have no idea how the manhva will do this tho 🤣 maybe there will be a version we will need to read in the hentai sites 😅

  8. Seraph

    Dude I feel awkward at how the smegsy scenes are…
    I wonder if they could try a way to spice it up…

    Something like this…

    (mentioning parts of the body in what would have been their first ever intimate union as a real couple, is a bit I don’t know…)

    “I didn’t imagine that I would end up being pierced from within the depths of my whole being.

    Overwhelmed by his lascivious gaze…

    I never expected to see such a side from this gorgeous masterpiece before me. My beloved favorite… Kael…”

    Sorry don’t mind me it still depends on how readers will be able to visualize this very beautiful milestone of their blooming love.

    1. Seraph

      “The deep thrusts in my depths became more uncontrollable while his surging heat keeps exploding within me…”

      “My body clung onto the figure grasping for him, as if he was ripping me apart underneath as it continued…”

      sheesh I should stop hahahahaha….

  9. Phii

    I didn’t expect the smexy scene. I was so immersed in Hestia’s internal conflict then Kael came hard! Gosh. And he said he loves Hestia🫠

  10. I have a weak heart lol I had to read the ahem! smexy scenes in batches XD But I love that he said to her point blank everything she needed to know. That he cherishes her for who she is, and he recognises her efforts. Not only that, he knows how Helios feels about her but will not let her go because he asjfauihsjkhdasd LOVES HER. That confession is 100% from the heart because he’s not the type of guy to say words for the sake of it. I love this chap so much

  11. leeshion

    Wait wait wait. That was so sudden oh my god??? And I’m sorry but it felt kinda….rapey. I mean, he suddenly came and dragged hestia to do it and she just let him sooooo dubcon at best.

    1. amethyst

      +1 I was starting to have existential crisis cause it seemed like I was the only one. I like the smut but then it dampened for me when it could have been so easy for her to just say she wanted it but she didn’t because the I feel like the Arthur’s in Asia can’t write mutual consent with hot sex either it’s cut out or boring.

      hestia never said anything from her mind out loud I just didn’t like it especially for a first time I can’ understand if it’s Kale first time but if it wasn’t then he’s super **** greedy when you know your first time already hurts probably bleeding then you go for how many times like be considerate And then I hate when they they do tropes like this when they leave for the next day and they won’t see each other for what months?

      like some men truly don’t be thinking, they only think with their **** don’t they I truly want to know if a girl is into this in real life? hard sex for the first time and then he leaves the next day for months on end, like what? and I still didn’t like how the ML earlier kissed her in middle night without her consent like sure your relationship you know she loves you, but I could still like someone and not want to kiss them Too early.

      but I do feel like I’m ranting it’s just this is already great novel this dampened a great plot point from me and I love smut too when it’s done correctly otherwise, I rather not have it at this point

  12. kitty ya

    I am reading this novel because I saw a post that said kaelus and hestia had 4 kids… I cam here for the smut and I’m having a feast!!!

  13. kimberlyjhoann

    I read this multiple times, and now I think he did that because he noticed Helios was interested in her.
    I’m not saying he doesn’t love her, just that he noticed that Hess knows that Helios was interested in her. So, he marked his territory in a possessive manner.

    1. Anne

      That… I agree with you, helios took his first love and that made him depressed for a long time, kaelus is worrying for her, there’s no guarantee that he will came back safe and hestia still in their home awaits him.
      Also he wants her to know that he is hers, body and soul that’s what he mean becoming real couple

      Anyway I’ve read this more than I can’t count, so for me Kael is a bit of jerk
      Especially when he force himself to her. If only there’s a redemption arc for how he treat hestia that would be awesome

    2. Loulou

      I 💯 agree. He loves her, he wants her to know that, and he most definitely doesn’t want Helios to try pulling some shhh while he’s gone. He’s just being more straightforward I guess so he doesn’t loose the woman he loves again, to the same person.

      But, on the other hand, Helios is literally here falling in love with every woman Kael falls in love with💀

  14. Eve

    There should have been some kind of warning OMG I WASN’T PREPARED!!! It was TOO HOT, not that I’m complaining tho, it was so refreshing seeing this new side of Kael 🙈🙈🙈💓💓💓👍✨️ you did it HESS, you WON.

  15. Alex

    HEELLPP .. My image of Kael manhwa is so soft like a sick little cotton puppy, I did not expect any of this. I wish there’s a headsup as I’m not prepared for any of this lol. I’m not complaining for that hot scene tho, I wonder how it would turn out in the manhwa. ^^

  16. Crisel

    Ohh my I’m not prepared for, this but I’m also not complaining.. 🤧🤧. So proud of baby Cael, your such a man, ( A hard hot dick, weighed down the swollen mound) me while reading “😶🥵🔥” .. I’ve been here because of the manhwa, I love the story and the manhwa so I couldn’t help it and find the novel. And petition this R19 well be included in the manhwa I hope to see the reaction of Cael and Hestia while doing that 🤧🥳. I’m happy

  17. Jen

    I have read this novel numerous and I can’t get enough of it. I do think it’s one of the healthiest progressions I’ve seen. Kaelus has been nothing but a green flag. People complaining about dubious consent and that it felt rapey. Can we put into perspective what kind of a time period this is set in. Albeit a contractual marriage, they are married and as such, Kaelus has a right to take what is his. He has been nothing but sweet to her and has been giving her plenty of time to think things over…but at some point, the rubbers gotta hit the road, yeah? People comparing him to Riftan, I think is pretty close (I absolutely love Under the Oak btw). Marriages weren’t all candy and rainbows in a time period like this and people complaining about Hestia not really having a say-so would have been a bit of a norm for this time period, yeah? Can we be honest that Hestia was being a bit indecisive up till now and she was worried about things Kael can’t even begin to imagine at this point in the story. I think it was important to boldly express his feelings in such a way, lest it end up like some of the other novels where it takes foreeeeevvvvvvveeer for realizations and action to occur. I like that Kaelus was staking his claim on what was his and was leaving no room for misunderstandings to occur. I say all this to say…GOOOOOOO KAEL! Imma get off my soap box now😅

    1. Mal

      I know it looks like he forced her, but to be honest after reading many manwhas/light novels, doujis and watching doramas (mostly from korean but also japanese), I believe many authors disregard some writing and think of it as passionate while to many of us looks on the edge of consent (when she says “stop”). So I take them with a grain of salt.
      Sometimes in the passionate scenes the FC is holding, also I’ve seen many doramas make the FC be “drunk” or drank a bit of alcohol before she does it with the MC. Some doujin artists draw the girl faces like they’re crying or suffering from the pain while pretending to make it look as pleasure. I don’t think any of this has to do with the time of the novel but a mistaken view of consent from these authors and artists.
      Perhaps in some years romance fiction from these authors will be more thoughtful about the consent and make the smex scenes look healthy while hot.

    2. amethyst

      Just because you’re into forceful sex doesn’t mean everyone is, especially I have the biggest problem with is this is her first time she said stop and maybe she didn’t mean stop stop but he could have took a breather and checked in,

      second of all the MC is from modern times so just because back then it was all cool to rape women everywhere doesn’t mean it’s okay just because it was a little bit forceful this time it doesn’t really make it that appealing or sexy when it happens. I don’t know because if you’re ignorant or not it doesn’t matter if they’re in a fake marriage you could still get raped by your boyfriend I heard countless stories like my friends when she loved the person so much and they didn’t want to lose them and when he already took off her panties she just went with it when you’re already midway through the action you feel like you can’t say no.

      in a novel and Arthur should stop making it so dubious where It could just be healthy.

      and it’s not the healthiest ever and just because there’s worse manga’s out there does not make me feel better about this particular novel when it could have been a 10 out of 10 but now it’s dropped to 8/10 But I’ll keep my mind open and hopefully the next scenes are better but based on my past knowledge it it probably won’t.

  18. Nana

    Fui muito bem alimentada, muito obrigada, esperava migalhas e ganhei um banquete enorme, e agora estou de boca aberta sem reação, thanks🫢

  19. laganias

    I was reading the manwha and saw someone saying that the novel has pretty good hot spicy scenes… REALLY THEY WEREN’T LYING AT ALL . I thought the hot would take a lot longer to happen, maybe be featured in a after ending special side episode but wow Cael really did surprise Hestia and all of us readers by taking the lead before his travel. He’s indeed a beast and… wow an all nighter plus a good morning ? High stamina man wow we praise you. 10/10 hot. I really liked it. Also, some people were saying it was dubious consent but I have to disagree. He knows how hesita draws her borders pretty well and respects it. He never ever would have keep going on if she pushed him or if she said “No I don’t want it go away”. He is such a green flag, no way that was dubcon.

    1. amethyst

      lmao I feel like people are really delulu and I’m pretty sure only women read these stories so this is highly disappointing when i keep seeing this

      she said stop he could have taken a moment to get a breather check in and make sure she didn’t really mean that sure the sex was hot I didn’t really like the words used such as Pssy and mound but each their own. for a first time that much back-to-back could be pretty brutal on the body I wonder if we’ll see any real-life consequences of that

  20. Pitidri

    Isso foi muito bom! Tão satisfatório que quase chorei!!! Ele quebrou Hestia no meio kkkkkkk adorei!!!!! Cara, não esperava por isso!!!! Que delícia ☺️

  21. terishiin

    Coming from the manhwa, which is quite reserved, so far before this chapter they have been having a simple and fluffy “I’ll quietly love you” type of relationship so I’m quietly screaming my head’s of rn with how blatant the choose of words were, some smut focused novels had ransacked their brains just to avoid that certain terms but here they just there and I’m loving it

    Oho, was Kael virgin? (he just have that vibes) but he sure seems quite extraordinary for a first timer

  22. Capc

    It got hot way too fast. First time the word pussy pop up i lol. But the way he said they will go straight to bed once he’s back is hotttt